Annalisa had concepted a very cool character living in a barren futuristic world, and she started this piece as part of the environmental assignment. I like the mood she's created here, but I think we can push things a bit to make the scene read better, with just a few tweaks
These would be my suggestions to help to establish a more epic feel, as well as to emphasize the graphic look she is leaning towards:
1. The background mountains are all the same height in the composition, and are quite low- I'm going to bring them up and make them a bit uneven to give a better sense of depth and danger. I'm also going to touch up the furthest mountain to push it farther in the distance. Notice that with this light, I will give the mountains some details on the dark side, as well as a bit of direct rim lighting
2. we want to give the sense that the character is really moving into the scene, so I'm going to create some compositional elements to lead the eye in that direction
3. The artist created some really nice lines in the landscape to establish the space- I will simplify and enhance these lines
4. Finally, I will adjust the tones and lighting on the character as well as her shadow to help place her in the scene.
you can see the steps on this GIF
and the final image ( with some simple lighting to give some extra epicness)!